Sunday 13 November 2016

Tristan's Writing


Week 14 - ...as I turn around it changed shape…

The other day I was trotting down a London alleyway when I came across an old fashion door built into the wall. As I walked closer I saw through the doorway into an empty victorian London street! Suddenly my curiosity got the better of me as I walked through the doorway into the victorian age. Suddenly I realised something was wrong, I wasn’t supposed to be here. No, of course I’m not supposed to be here I told myself. suddenly I saw my first sign of life, if you could call it life, it was a weird looking robotic blob. As I turned around (to run back to modern London) it changed shape into a hideous creature and chased me all the way back to modern London. Suddenly I realised that the beast had stopped chasing me but little did I know I had unleashed an ancient beast that would terrorise the world.

Week 13 - wide, orange, crocodile, within, collapsed

Day 1
As I hike through the horrible swamps of this even more horrid planet, I regret ever coming on this stupid expedition. Suddenly I hear a loud growl and from out of the shadows within the collapsed ancient temple of the moon god Ramun comes a giant orange crocodile with a tail as wide as an airbus A380. As I ran back to camp the crocodile pursued me all the way!
Day 2
When I wake up to a miserable new day I hear a growling noise. Suddenly the crocodile that was stalking me the day before burst into my tent and ate me!
Day 3
I still can’t believe the crocodile ate me without biting me. At the moment I am in the crocodile's stomach and have approximately two minutes until I am pooped out.



Week 11 - Message from Space

Greetings humans of earth! I hate to inform you that #4674, our home planet has become a barren wasteland because we ohbots have never stopped littering, burning gasoline and diesel and chopping trees down.I tell you this as a warning: if you earthlings carry on polluting earth, earth will become a barren wasteland like our #4674.
So please don’t pollute any more and start recycling in case we make a ohbot colony because we don’t want to live on a horrible planet in the future. I must admit it will be bad enough living amongst you earthlings.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Tristan
    You certainly have a powerful argument here and I am sure everyone would agree with you that we need to care for our planet.
    Miss T
    Hampshire

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