Saturday, 11 February 2017

Shaelyn's Writing

Week 33 - ....In the Flash of Lighting....

In the flash of lighting I saw:
Glowing massive clouds,
Trees falling down,
Leaves of fire,
People running around.

At the sound of thunder I saw:
Terrified babies crying,
All the children running,
Worried mothers counting,
My father coming to me.

When the rumbling came I saw:
Houses tumbling down,
Friends run round screaming,
Children fall down crying,
Everybody sobbing.

When it all stops:
The lighting stops flashing,
The thunder stops rumbling,
The ground stops shaking,
And everybody smiles.

The happiness:
Everybody Laughing,
Babies are smiling,
And children and giggling,
As happiness floods through the land.

By Shaelyn




Week 32 - Spooky Burger


“I’m going to Spooky Burger,” I sung as I pranced around my room.
“Hurry up Simi” my older sister, Carrie called.
I scampered down the stairs. When we got there we sat at a table closest to the wall.
“What would you like tonight?” a kind looking waitress asked.
“Two cheeseburgers please,” Carrie answered.
The waitress sped off and soon our cheese burgers came. Carrie and I were talking when suddenly Carrie looked like she’d seen a ghost.
“Your burger,” she finally managed to say.
I looked behind me. Two hands popped out of the wall and were lifting my cheese burger through it. We left Spooky Burger immediately and ran home.
“ Well, now we know why it’s called Spooky Burger”.


Week 30- ...I just couldn’t eat something so…


Kidnapped


Caroline and I were walking home when a hand tapped me on the shoulder.
“Can I walk you home?” a man asked me.
I didn’t want to be rude so I accepted his offer. When we were away from Caroline, he put duct tape over my mouth and threw me into his car.
When I woke up, I was trapped. I was cuffed from head to toe.
The man came back in the room holding what looked like a worm sandwich.
“Eat this,” he said as he forced it into my mouth.
I just couldn’t eat something so horrible, I thought.
When he was in the room I stole his keys. I unlocked myself and ran home.
At home mum taught me a saying, ‘Stranger, danger.’


Week 29…the slime dripped through…

A Slimy Mess  

As night fell, my friend Shay came over for a sleepover. We decided that when my parents were asleep we’d sneak off to the old abandoned hotel. My parents fell asleep, so we put on our hoodies and set off down the street.
We walked into the hotel when Shay said,
“Maybe we should go. I don’t like it here.”
“Are you scared?” I sniggered.
She shook her head. We continued walking.
Suddenly something green landed on my face.
“Ick! It’s slime,” I said in disgust.
Soon the slime dripped through a cracked in the roof. I shrieked, and so did Shay. We ran home and hid under my blankets never to be seen again.





Week 24



Reawaken


Once before dinosaurs walked this earth, the gods were making land. In order to have the forest and green parts of the earth Te Fitiavana ( goddess of the forest and plants) had to give her life to grow things. The other gods buried her body. After many thousands of years Te Fitiavana was still buried. The legend says that one day she will rise again. On this particular day the people of Rotorua  were going to cut down all the trees. Riley chopped the tree that was on Te Fitiavana’s palm. The ground started rumbling and Te Fitiavana’s palm was the first body part to rise. Te Fitiavana came up.
“Sorry, ” she said sweetly.
Everyone bowed and they built her a house in the museum. Now, she silently sleeps and in 100 years she will reawaken.


By: Shaelyn


Week 23 - gingerly, yellow, remarkable, discovered, however.


The Secret Mission


Mataya walked across the room to Mike.
“ Take a cookie, ’’ she demanded.
Mike hesitated. What trick is she cooking up for me? he asked himself.
He gingerly took a cookie.
“Now eat ” she ordered.
She walked toward Kyle and mumbled something in her ear. Kyle’s long yellow jacket wiped across Mike as she past him.
“I need to speak with you, ” she whispered.
They went into a private room.
“Happy Birthday, ’’ all the spys sang.
“What a remarkable party. However there’s just one problem. Where’s the cake?” Mike said.
“Over here, ” said a group of spies.
Soon enough he discovered that the cake was right in front of his face.
“Aww! I love working with you guys,” Mike said.

By: Shaelyn


Week 22 - Laughter


My Best Find


It was a lovely summers day. Most people would be relaxing at a hot beach. Not me. I work for Mimi’s Mine so I’m in an underground mine looking for something. No one told me what I was looking for, I just had to dig until I found something. Soon enough I found something. It looked like a…. Actually I didn’t know what it is. I called the supervisor over.
“It seems to be a piece of pixem (fairy dust). Let’s go see Mimi.’’ he said.

I gulped. Mimi was the boss and she was incredibly tough. When we saw her she was really nice. She let me have the rest of the month off. We threw a humongous party and laughter filled the mine.


Week 21- ...suddenly all the lights went out


Darkness Forever


It was ten o’clock at night, probably when most adults decide that halloween is over. My bag only had a few lollies in it. I knocked on one more door then I started heading home. Just as I started doing that, I had the strangest feeling that something was watching me. I turned around to see an old lady.
“ Would you like a sweet?” she said.
I nodded so I followed her to her house. Her house was kind of creepy but I went inside anyway. She invite me to sit at the table when suddenly all the lights went out and a ghost floated through the door. Soon enough I was in the old lady’s tummy.

By: Shaelyn

Haylee's Writing

Week 33 -...in the flash of lightning I saw..

The Memory

Today is the 13th of October! It is my birthday!!
As I hopped out of bed I realised I would be getting my breakfast in bed so I yelled out,
“Good morning!”
As I hopped back into bed I heard Mum call “Happy Birthday sweetie!!”
I was excited. In came grandma, Dad, Mum, Sophie and little Chelsea.
“Chloe, I hope you don’t mind, but it is raining. We can still have a good day, right?”
I nodded.
Suddenly I heard a bolt of lightning hit the sky! I looked out of my window. In the flash of lighting I saw a birthday present! Then I remembered, Presents! Everyone gave me presents!

I had an amazing day despite the bad weather.






Week 32- picture prompt


Billy’s Big Burgers.


One day I was walking in the street and I saw  a new restaurant called Billy’s Big Burgers.
So I walked into the restaurant and ordered a gluten free burger. I sat at a table for one, near a wall.
5 minutes later a crack started to form in the wall. It looked weird so I moved my chair on the other side of the table. Suddenly the crack grew bigger and longer. I decided to go ask a waiter for help. I looked around but no one was there. I looked at the wall and suddenly some hands made of newspaper were holding a big, gluten free burger. I ran out of the restaurant screaming!!


Week 30
...I just couldn't eat something so…


The nasty food challenge.
By Haylee


One rainy day a boy called Mike asked his brother Sam if he wanted to play a game.
So they went upstairs and they asked their dad to play the Nasty food challenge. He said “Yes”.
They asked dad to put nasty foods in brown paper bags and write a number on each.
It was now Mike’s turn. He picked up the bag saying 41 and then looked inside with disgust. It was dad’s fish that he caught 7 years ago!!
Mike said “I give up. You win! I am not eating this 7 year old fish.I just couldn’t eat something so gross and old.”


Week 29
  ...the slime dripped through...

The Haunted house!!
By Haylee

One misty day Charlie wandered through The Haunted Woods.
The Haunted woods is scary place. In the woods there are a few beasts.
Charlie had wandered so far he didn’t know where he was and how to get home. Suddenly charlie came up to a big,old,crooked house. Charlie was very scared. Soon he decided to walk in so he opened the door and walked right in. A few minutes later charlie came to an awful door. There was slime too and the slime dripped through holes in the door slowly. Charlie was so scared because he heard noises so he ran out of the house and strangely through the Haunted woods.




The humongous hand.

By Haylee

In the city lived a boy called Charlie aged six, nearly seven. He was living with his dad who was called Henry.
One morning they went to the park. When they were sitting down eating their lunch they heard rumbling! ‘What is going on dad?’
‘I don't know Charlie.’
Then from under the ground came a humongous hand slowly rising.
Aaarrrgggghhhhh! Charlie and his father ran as fast as they could, screaming and shouting as loudly as possible!
SLAM! went their front door.
‘Dad I am really scared.’
‘So am I son. Now lets sit down and watch a cartoon to calm us down.’



Week 23-Gingerly, Yellow, Remarkable,Discovered, However.


Mimi  is alone!


Once there was a girl called Mimi who lived in a cottage in a town called Burlen Town. Mimi lived with her father. One cold day Mimi’s father had to do some chores. But Mimi gingerly said no, not in this weather. But he started walking in the cold to the shops. Mimi was scared for she was worried about her father. She wanted a nice cup of cocoa to help calm her. So she made the cocoa. Suddenly the door opened...Who is it? It was Mimi’s father.
‘Look what I found on the road, it’s a remarkable yellow ring. I discovered it outside the mall.’
‘However did it get there father?’
‘I don’t know.’

By Haylee


Week 22- Laughter


Laughter can be known two different ways, as a nice laugh and an evil laugh.
At school children share jokes and they laugh a lot.
Usually we laugh at least twenty times each day, well for me.
Generally someone laughs, then your friend or the person in front laughs too.
Hearing a weird laugh can make you laugh too, even if you are a way away.
Talking to someone, then doing something weird can lead to a hurtful laugh.
Evil villains have evil laughs that are weird because they go Ha,Ha,Ha.
Reading a funny book can lead to a laugh.

Haylee

Bessie's Writing

Week-33 … in the flash of lightning I saw…

The Flashback

It was June 31st and today was grandma’s funeral.
Grandma had died a few weeks ago because she had a car crash while going shopping. It was night and she was on her way back when suddenly a storm started to churn up. Every minute it got worse, until it started to shoot lightning bolts.
As she fought her way through the road, she crashed.
That night after the funeral I went to my room, sad.  
There was a flash of lightning and in the flash of lightning I saw a flashback of grandma.
So I went to bed, sad and sorrowful.



Week-32 picture prompt


Ghost


One day I thought “I fancy a burger”.
I went to my favourite restaurant “The Ghost.” I stepped in and found a strange pair of hands I hadn’t noticed that before. I went to get my order and when I came back the hands were gone, I thought I was going crazy and just then my order was ready. I kept an eye on the spot the hand appeared and ate my burger then I looked away for a few seconds and suddenly in the corner of my eyes I saw the hands coming out with a burger in its hands. I didn’t believe my eyes, so I left the restaurant amazed.


Week-30...I just couldn’t eat something so…


What should I eat?


“Yes mum! I’m sure I don’t need anything”.
Today was soooo boring I’ve done everything I can do. Later on, after sitting for half an hour I decided to eat. I looked in the fridge. It was filled up to the brim with all the foods you’d wish to have but for some reason I just couldn’t eat something so I went to do another half an hour of nothing.
Then suddenly something came to my mind. I could do some of the puzzle mum had bought for me. One hour passed by and finally I finished the puzzle. Now what? I know! I could nap, so I did, and that was the boringest day of my life.


Week-29 ...the slime dripped through...

My Creepy Grandpa’s House

Lily’s a nice girl but she had the worst luck. Her grandpa was a peculiar but rich man. He owned a huge mansion, it wasn’t exactly what you call home; it looked more like a horror house. He often invited his relatives but they refused, except his granddaughter Lily. She didn’t mind. She often went to play but it soon changed. One day she went to explore her grandpa’s house and she went to the attic. She suddenly saw her childhood slime, the slime dripped through the roof, she felt a chill down her spine and from that day on she was never seen again.



My Secret


Yesterday was a day when I had a terrible horrible accident that absolutely no one should know about.
I was jogging through the park when I felt a sudden rumble that came out of the ground. I looked around for a person. Suddenly a humongous, dirty hand went out of the ground towards me. I forced it to immediately let go of me I ran as fast as I could.
I ran to a tree and I couldn't see the hand anymore. Then it trapped me by putting it’s
hand under the tree. Suddenly it went black.

By Bessie



Week 22 - laughter


Laughter


Laughter is a painful and enjoyable experience,
As you may know laughter can be something evil or nice,
Unforgettable it is, sometimes it's hilarious
Great laughter isn't all, there are always evil cackles,
Hating evil giggle is something almost everyone hates,
The word laughter isn't always great joy,
Evil villains have always been known for their giggles,
Repeating that sound is also a sign of great happiness,

By Bessie


Week 21  ….suddenly the lights went out…


The Time Travel


Tom is a lovely boy
He was about to move that day and he was very excited.
When he got there he rushed inside.


Soon it was night. In bed, Tom was reading.
Then suddenly all the lights went out.
Moments later he turned the lights on again. He was staring at this man in his 1900’s outfit.
Tom asked, “Excuse me, where am I?”
The man didn't answer or do anything about it.


Soon it was day in the real world and Tom vanished from everything.
No one remembered him; he was never ever seen again.

By Bessie

Sunday, 13 November 2016

Tristan's Writing


Week 14 - ...as I turn around it changed shape…

The other day I was trotting down a London alleyway when I came across an old fashion door built into the wall. As I walked closer I saw through the doorway into an empty victorian London street! Suddenly my curiosity got the better of me as I walked through the doorway into the victorian age. Suddenly I realised something was wrong, I wasn’t supposed to be here. No, of course I’m not supposed to be here I told myself. suddenly I saw my first sign of life, if you could call it life, it was a weird looking robotic blob. As I turned around (to run back to modern London) it changed shape into a hideous creature and chased me all the way back to modern London. Suddenly I realised that the beast had stopped chasing me but little did I know I had unleashed an ancient beast that would terrorise the world.

Week 13 - wide, orange, crocodile, within, collapsed

Day 1
As I hike through the horrible swamps of this even more horrid planet, I regret ever coming on this stupid expedition. Suddenly I hear a loud growl and from out of the shadows within the collapsed ancient temple of the moon god Ramun comes a giant orange crocodile with a tail as wide as an airbus A380. As I ran back to camp the crocodile pursued me all the way!
Day 2
When I wake up to a miserable new day I hear a growling noise. Suddenly the crocodile that was stalking me the day before burst into my tent and ate me!
Day 3
I still can’t believe the crocodile ate me without biting me. At the moment I am in the crocodile's stomach and have approximately two minutes until I am pooped out.



Week 11 - Message from Space

Greetings humans of earth! I hate to inform you that #4674, our home planet has become a barren wasteland because we ohbots have never stopped littering, burning gasoline and diesel and chopping trees down.I tell you this as a warning: if you earthlings carry on polluting earth, earth will become a barren wasteland like our #4674.
So please don’t pollute any more and start recycling in case we make a ohbot colony because we don’t want to live on a horrible planet in the future. I must admit it will be bad enough living amongst you earthlings.

Thursday, 10 November 2016

Logan's Writing

As I turn around it changed shape

Christmas catastrophe

It's now christmas day and the whole family was sitting round the christmas tree waiting to open the presents. But first we need to have breakfast, with mince pies and turkey  viciously trying to persuade me not to eat them. As we sit down every one digs into the meal as I try to guess what's in my presents. Then mum says “Come and have something to eat darling.”

As I turned  around it changed shape. It was one of the presents and it was one of mine. It turned from a box into a gigantic circle. Mum said “ What did we get Logan for christmas?”


Week 12 - The legs

“Sir, sir the legs are ready,” I said
“I'm coming now,” said the master.
“I hope the legs are good enough for my master,” I muttered. “If not, I won’t be home for dinner.”
I put the new legs in the pot as I heard the thumping of my master coming down the steps.
THUMP! THUMP! THUMP!
I quickly stirred the pot with the legs in and poured the spices in.
THUMP! THUMP! THUMP!

The master came in the room and tried my marvelous creation. My head was thinking weird things at that moment. The creation is...

5 Sentence Challenge: Week 5 - Fireworks

Boom crackle pop. Fireworks are such fun colourful explosions that light up the night but sadly kill a lot of innocent people. Fireworks are normally lit on Guy Fawkes day and I personally think it is the most colourful day of the year. When the fireworks go up in the air you get deafened by the sound of them screaming for their worthless lives. Boom, boom, boom and that's a firework for you.