Monday 2 May 2016

Jenna's Writing

Week 24- “Alcatraz prison”

Cold Handcuffs

It is hard working in the police force.
I don’t have time to ride my horse.
Broken handcuffs wrapped in a handkerchief.
It will not impress the chief.
Shut the cell, lock the door!
I don't want to arrest people any more!
Why do they commit a crime?
It is only a matter of time...
Until they get locked up in a cell.
If they escape we will ring the bell.
Loud for all to hear.
It will hurt the prisoner's ear; they will stop and shriek in fear!
Thier faces will turn crimson.

When they are in Alcatraz prison.




Week 22- violin, yellow, eaten, airplane, swept.


Half eaten donut.


In the morning I wake up on a 5 star, luxury, yellow airplane.
Well, not that luxury, there were half eaten donuts on the floor.
This place really should be swept.
At the back of the airplane there was a lady playing the violin.
Then the violin string broke! She stepped on a half eaten donut, grabbed a parachute and said “adios amigos” and jumped.
So I got a broom, swept the floor and tossed the donuts down to the violin lady.
“How dare you!?” she screamed.

We continued the flight in the 5 star, luxury, yellow airplane.

by Jenna

Week 17 “...stairway to the sky


Sky dragon


I am having a walk on the beach and the ground starts shaking. I think it is an earthquake.
As I stumble and fall on my hands and knees some sandy stairs are forming in sky.
The rumbling stops. I do not, and will not, dare to go any closer. On the side of the stairs some flowers start blooming. A white-scaled dragon slowly comes down the stairs and rests its head on the soft sand asking me if i want a ride.
The badge on the dragon saddle says ‘sky dragon.’
I hop on and the white-scaled dragon takes me away up the stairs.
How long until we get the top of the stairs to the sky?   


By Jenna

Week 16 “...suddenly…”


The Gannet.


Flying high in the sky is a silhouette of a bird. The water below is still. The fish below have no idea what the bird is.


SUDDENLY the bird zooms down going at 150 km per hour. Just then the fish notices it’s a gannet… SPLASH picking up about three fish in his mouth. Water goes still and silent again.
The gannet gets ready to strike again. All the fish know that it is a gannet now so they swim deeper. This is very unfortunate for the gannet. The gannet calls his mates with one big squawk.


Soon after the army of gannets bolt at the water. They all hope to get good fish for their family.

By Jenna

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jenna,

    You used the prompt words in an extremely original and creative way. Your story flowed well from start to finish and it's clear you spent a lot of time making sure your work was perfect.

    Emily, Team100

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