Sophie's Writing

The Spiky Durian

One day there was a little girl called Leana.

She was walking through Durian Forest and she had her camping things.

She walked and walked until she found the perfect spot to camp.

Then she got everything ready.

Once she had finished Leana thought she could have a walk

so she packed a bag of food.

When she had finished packing Leana walked into the forest.

Suddenly a storm came pouring in.

“OH NO!” Leana cried as she started to run back to her tent.

But some of the Durians dropped onto her head

and all the gooey slime ran down her face.

When she got to her tent she washed off somehow and went to sleep.   

Week 32: …but I didn’t understand the instructions…

The confusing puzzle

“Hello BeBe” said Sophia.

“Hi Sophia” replied BeBe.

She and Sophia went to ask BeBe’s mom if they could go to Puzzle- world.

“I think you should ask your mom Sophia. OK?” answered BeBe’s mom.

“Sure” Sophia replied.

Almost straight away she ran to find her mom at the end of the street.

It didn’t take long because she is really fast!

“She said yes!” Sophia panted.

“Yay!” cried BeBe.

Once they got there Sophia choose one and the operator told her the instructions.

“But I don’t understand the instructions!” she cried.

“Here I’ll do it!” BeBe said and very quickly did it but then it was time to go home.  

Week 29: shouted, grave, crimson, frantically, misty

Once there was a little girl called Rosa who loved to do gymnastics!

One day Rosa was in her gym club Trystar practising for a competition the next day. When she got home she had a grave look on her face.

“What’s wrong Rosa?” her mum asked.

“I’m not okay!” she shouted turning a kind of crimson colour.

Then she ran up into her room.  When she was there she found out that it was very misty! So she frantically rushed to turn on her fan. Once the mist had gone away it was time for bed.

Then the next day it was the comp and at the end Rosa came first!